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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 2:13:34 PM
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_MavericK_
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I liked it. 
Ok, here's a song remotely recent...
Put the gun to my head
Pull the trigger
And blow my heart apart
Poison drips like sugar from your lips
But it makes death so much sweeter
You can cry
Say you're sorry
But that won't change a thing
I'm still alone here
Whole to you
But dead to myself
I breathe you for the last time
Shoot your hate under my skin
I've had enough of mere existence
Begone, my heroin
Trembling fingers
Take up needle and thread
To sew my heart back together again
But the whole time my body screams
Wanting back the blood that was its death
Over and over and over again
I want to go back but the stitches hold fast
Over and over and over again
The knife hovers over my wrist
I'm tempted to kill the only part of me you left untouched
But my body isn't worth enough
To make up for the loss
Kinda morbid, I know.  But that's why we need salvation, isn't it?
< Message edited by stephiroth -- 4/8/2008 2:19:38 PM >
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 3:40:03 PM
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yeah!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 3:46:53 PM
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ChiefWannahakaloogie
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well if you guys insist...
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 3:57:31 PM
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ChiefWannahakaloogie
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ok here goes. i've been working on this for so long, and i normally don't share my work with other people, so keep your mind open when you read this.
The grass so green
The skies so blue
Spectre is really great!
so...what'd you guys think?
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 3:59:43 PM
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fabius
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I think that's neat! It's simple and cool, at the same time.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:00:18 PM
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Konstantinos
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i love you more!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:04:18 PM
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Meaning?
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:06:32 PM
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That wasn't as epic as Cheese.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:06:53 PM
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Konstantinos
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ok since we are all sharing, this is something i wrote 4 years ago and finished it a week ago
there was a boy named phil. he was 5 years old. then he grew up and became famous for writing barney the purple dinosaur stories. eventually terrorists found his house and exploded him. but phil was not alone. aliens had watched him his whole life and sought revenge. then E.T. came to earth, banished since he was a retarded alien. he found a bunch of kids. his finger was freaky.
the end.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:11:42 PM
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hawknelsonismyfriend
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LOL sounds like somthing I would make up. Except mine are about gnomes and nuns and osama instead of aliens.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:14:22 PM
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quote:
Meaning?
meaning you need to watch big fish!
quote:
there was a boy named phil. he was 5 years old. then he grew up and became famous for writing barney the purple dinosaur stories. eventually terrorists found his house and exploded him. but phil was not alone. aliens had watched him his whole life and sought revenge. then E.T. came to earth, banished since he was a retarded alien. he found a bunch of kids. his finger was freaky.
the end.
hahahahahhahahhaha.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 4:16:11 PM
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Konstantinos
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you guys dont understand the meaning of my story
the FINGER WAS FREAKYYYYYYY
moral story? dont have a freaky finger
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 5:39:34 PM
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Y o u_c a n t_s p e l l_c r a p_w i t h o u t_r a p!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/8/2008 10:57:43 PM
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_MavericK_
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I must agree.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/9/2008 12:24:08 AM
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quote:
ORIGINAL: hawknelsonismyfriend
Y o u_c a n t_s p e l l_c r a p_w i t h o u t_r a p!
the devil wears prada would disagree.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/11/2008 6:56:04 PM
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hawknelsonismyfriend
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Donkey Basketball / Cause It's the Best of All
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 2:21:01 AM
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This is something more serious. Just things going on around me. In life. I'm sure most of you won't understand. But, whatever.
Confusion is just an imaginary voice inside my head,
Where demons dwell and make their bed,
Thought is no more a process than a life left unaccomplished,
Dreams are swallowed up by nightmarish requiems, or so it seems.
A poetic rhythm without a beat from the pen,
A man tumbling down mountains that lead into the valley of sin,
A pathetic plea from one's worthless heart,
A land where truth and fiction is dancing no longer a part.
Travesty is sweeping in with sweet romance,
When hope and things to come begin a stationary dance,
'Oh, we learn from our mistakes', they say,
If that were true, I wouldn't find myself in this mess everyday.
Emotions, emotions, motivated by the tides of the ocean,
Crashing over sandcastles built by words we have once spoken,
They housed these useful feelings of depression and obsession, and all these things inside my head,
Sometimes I think it would be better to be unconscious instead,
Can't you see?
This is the harsh reality and state that I'm living in,
With a population of more than I know.
Oh.
This is the part where it ends,
Where a song or poem did begin... and I,
Don't want to live with regrets I often make,
The chance to take a hold of you with my eyes,
Kiss your soft lips beyond midnight.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 4:15:29 PM
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hawknelsonismyfriend
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ok...
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 4:32:39 PM
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hawknelsonismyfriend
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OK this is kind of an emo-ish song but here:
The sun says welcome home but I'm feelin’ all alone.
I step outside and watch the weeds take the garden.
I gave my best but sometimes I must confess my hope runs dry
and I draw lines which makes things harder.
So I have to believe that is gonna be my year.
I stand up straight look alive you'll never know. (The Pain)
So I have to believe that is gonna be my year
I stand up straight look alive and be on standby.
And I will roll the dice for two, I will roll the dice for you.
When the day wakes, I arise and try again.
The cloudless sky, how the summer meets the eyes.
Here I am a longing soul with good intentions it comes and goes
just like the ghost I always know.
I watch the snails cross the roads
but they never make it.
So you'll have to believe that is gonna be my year
I stand up straight look alive you'll never know. (The Pain)
So you'll have to believe that is gonna be my year
I stand up straight look alive and be on standby.
And I will roll the dice for two, I will roll the dice for you.
When the day wakes I arise and try again.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 4:35:08 PM
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Rocker4christ123
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Wow everyone can write except for me !!! im amazed !!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 4:39:41 PM
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Rocker4christ123
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Yeah well somewher in this thread is a really terrible couple of pieces of songs and a story of mine if you read them u will c what i mean !!
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