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Positive criticism sought - 11/12/2008 5:01:04 PM   
Little_1


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Status: offline 		I have set up a blog called "In Step with the Lord" and am looking for some genuine tips, advice and constructive criticism.

The blog has a problem with spacing between paragraphs and sometimes does not allow me to put these in but that is not what I am looking for helps concerning.

I would just appreciate some feed back on style, how I could improve writing blogs, etc.

Much appreciated (I hope )

Little_1

The link is below

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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/12/2008 10:18:04 PM   
Dancre


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Status: offline 		I like it. I wasn't able to read the whole thing but I will later. Unfortunately, I have a very impatient kitty sitting at my feet who needs me to throw her ball. sigh. you want a cat????

kim
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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/13/2008 12:44:42 PM   
Little_1


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ORIGINAL: Dancre

I like it. I wasn't able to read the whole thing but I will later. Unfortunately, I have a very impatient kitty sitting at my feet who needs me to throw her ball. sigh. you want a cat????

kim



Kim - I was trying to find your profile last night so I could PM you to ask if you would mind helping. I remembered you saying that the Lord wanted you to do more writing again on another thread but I couldn't find the thread and I couldn't remember your on site name (although I could remember your icon - however, I gave up looking 'cos I was tired last pm (work 4 days a week as well as keep house)! However, the Lord put you on my mind. Then I come on here and see you have responded.

God knew!

It's intended to be an 'inspirational blog' for the most part and sometimes the posts will be shorter depending on the passage of text and what the Lord speaks to me through His Word.

I would really appreciate your 'honest' opinion (you can PM me if you don't want to say on site).


Thanks again
Little_1

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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/13/2008 12:49:19 PM   
Little_1


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Status: offline 		P.S. meant to say - have never blogged before and any helps appreciated.

Little_1

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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/13/2008 2:34:57 PM   
Little_1


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Status: offline 		“It is a badge of honor to accept valid criticism.” (Prov. 25:12, LB)

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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/14/2008 10:15:43 AM   
techne


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ORIGINAL: Little_1
“It is a badge of honor to accept valid criticism.” (Prov. 25:12, LB)

i wish more people knew this verse...

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So that they still know how to say: this is true and that is false.

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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/14/2008 11:26:35 PM   
Dancre


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Status: offline 		Yeah, I'll help you. I'll read it on Saturday and let you know. But from what I saw, it looked good to me. Of course, the cat was pawing at my leg, then my back. sigh . . . and yes, my life does revolve around my cat. . . .sigh . . . PM me any time!!! :)

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ORIGINAL: Little_1

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ORIGINAL: Dancre

I like it. I wasn't able to read the whole thing but I will later. Unfortunately, I have a very impatient kitty sitting at my feet who needs me to throw her ball. sigh. you want a cat????

kim



Kim - I was trying to find your profile last night so I could PM you to ask if you would mind helping. I remembered you saying that the Lord wanted you to do more writing again on another thread but I couldn't find the thread and I couldn't remember your on site name (although I could remember your icon - however, I gave up looking 'cos I was tired last pm (work 4 days a week as well as keep house)! However, the Lord put you on my mind. Then I come on here and see you have responded.

God knew!

It's intended to be an 'inspirational blog' for the most part and sometimes the posts will be shorter depending on the passage of text and what the Lord speaks to me through His Word.

I would really appreciate your 'honest' opinion (you can PM me if you don't want to say on site).


Thanks again
Little_1
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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/16/2008 11:18:31 AM   
Little_1


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ORIGINAL: Dancre

Yeah, I'll help you. I'll read it on Saturday and let you know...... Of course, the cat was pawing at my leg, then my back. sigh . . . and yes, my life does revolve around my cat. . . .sigh . . . PM me any time!!! :)



Thanks Dancre - appreciated.

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RE: Positive criticism sought - 11/16/2008 5:40:09 PM   
Dancre


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Status: offline 		I like it a lot!! I don't how I can help you b/c it's really good. You give your problem and how God helped you. Keep going. You remind me a lot of Kisstheson, Amy. She does this same thing. She gives a verse and what it means to her, then asks questions making me reevaluate my own faith. I say keep going, you're doing GREAT!! I look forward to reading the rest of the posts!!!!!

kim
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