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Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/22/2008 11:05:29 PM

PopsiLufsJesus

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Let me see what You see
when You look inside my heart
I know that You know me
Please show me, me part by part

I want to see my true reflection
the one that's found in You
I long to drown in Your perfection
To in You become anew

I want to discover myself in You
to know what You say about me
to understand what is true
to be what You would have me to be

I'm tired of listening to all of the lies
Tired of hiding behind this disguise
I want to see me through Your eyes
to stand and be counted, to arise...

Popsi

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Then He said to His disciples, �The harvest truly is plentiful, but the laborers are few. Therefore pray the Lord of the harvest to send out laborers into His harvest.� ~Matthew 9:37-38

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RE: Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/23/2008 3:09:53 PM

nannu

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Popsi, I loved your poem It said so much.

Thanks ,Nannu

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RE: Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/23/2008 3:39:21 PM

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Go, Poppy! That was great girl!!

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RE: Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/23/2008 3:56:18 PM

PopsiLufsJesus

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Hey guys, thanks.

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Then He said to His disciples, �The harvest truly is plentiful, but the laborers are few. Therefore pray the Lord of the harvest to send out laborers into His harvest.� ~Matthew 9:37-38

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RE: Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/24/2008 5:42:51 AM

RyansWife

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This poem would make a good song. Do you write songs?

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RE: Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/24/2008 10:41:06 AM

PopsiLufsJesus

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Yes, that is usually what I write. Normally I don't write poems.

And thanks

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Then He said to His disciples, �The harvest truly is plentiful, but the laborers are few. Therefore pray the Lord of the harvest to send out laborers into His harvest.� ~Matthew 9:37-38

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RE: Just a Poem :) 09/22 - 9/30/2008 12:17:31 PM

gradeasmarts

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great poem, i see this as a beat poem, it would be great with some music in the backround

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